Our 2nd Presentation

The presentation

This is the video of our 2nd presentation. I think that on a whole, our presentation went quite well. We got across all the information we needed to and I think that we got quite a good response from our audience. However we did get a few points that we could improve on. These include:

• Target audience- Our feed back said that we could have mentioned our target audience a bit more and we could also adapt our ideas to make them more suited to the target audience. To work on this we will review our products and find a way to make them more appropriate for the target audience. We could do this by adapting the language we use on our campaign. We could use a few slang words as teenagers often use slang so this will make our campaign seem more relaxed and less formal which teenagers prefer.

• Link to the brief- We were told that we could link to the brief more in our presentation. Unfortunately, we cant change this in the presentation however, we could continue to make lots of links to the brief throughout the rest of our projects. We could do this in our planning and also on our final products

The Prezi